allison811

i think it is a very interesting idea to combine images with letters. It definatly give readers a break without distracting them while they are reading it. There should be more story like this becaues it is very rare to see an author to use differenet resources. Last, hope there will be a continue to this story.

这个改变的还可以，美少女战士，年少时的回忆啊

430040

楼主太有才了连美少女战士都可以yy，不过相当的好看。

edyswghe

只有两章吗？看得不过瘾啊，才干了一个，出场也就三个，御姐都没出现

wsbgwpsbsm

美少女战士，小时候看的动画片，这里配上图看着挺有感觉，不过凌辱的场面太多，真正做爱的描写有点少。

这个真的要算是图文并茂了吧  我是比较喜欢这类的文章  不过还是缺口味  就是说有点轻

图片不错 故事流畅 这可是小时候每天都看， 有没有好看点的漫画么？
楼主请继续

allison811

I think this is a very nice written stroy where it give many percise details on little things and it get people to feel it is happen right in front of them

peng735333025

美少女战士的同人文呢，还有H图片，谢谢楼主分享。

楼主真的是别出心裁，文章不仅写得好，而且还配上了图片，够新颖。。